Talk:Truth Serum (EP)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 17:52, 25 May 2017 (UTC)

Lead

• related to the matter → related to that matter  Done
• to keep those tracks for herself, because she considered them too personal → to keep those tracks for herself as she considered them too personal  Done
• released independently → other way round  Done
• Unlink "record deal" as it's a pretty common term  Done
• the tracks talk about her "most intense" love affair → you don't need the "..." here  Done
• mostly positive reviews from critics → you can add "music" to critics to sound better  Done
• It peaked at number 13 → state "the record" here as it may get confused with "the songs"  Done
• the forty-ninth best-selling album during 2014 in the country → 2014's 49th best-selling album in the country  Done
• spending 23 weeks on the chart → leave "on the chart" out as you have Norwegian Albums Chart  Done
• The Great Escape Festival in United Kingdom → add "the" before United Kigdom  Done
• was released as the third single from the EP. It was a commercial success in Europe and Oceania → (to avoid word repetition) was released as the third single from the EP to commercial success in Europe and Oceania, ...  Done

Infobox

• You need alternative text for the cover art  Done

Background and release

• with whom played → with whom she played
• an English A&R → link "A&R" to artist and repertoire
• writing songs about the matter → "the" to "that"
• could not handled it anymore → is it supposed to mean "could not handle it anymore"?
• the artist released independently → the artist independendly released
• It received a larger attention from music blogs → state "from publications" here to avoid repetition
• Unlink "record deal", as in the lead
• and that it will be released → and that it would be released

Inspiration and composition

• several songs prior the release → several songs prior to the release
• were taken from the demos → were taken from her demos + unlink "demos"
• that; "When you look → that "when you look
• to being under the influence of drugs.[38][39][40][27] → fix the order of the references
• "[could not] think straight".[41][8] → same
• her boyfriend end the relationship.[43][29] → same

Promotion

• which are represented as black ghosts.[50][25] → order of references
• The song was a commercial success → say "the recording" here to avoid repetition
• It was a commercial success in some European countries → It similarly experienced success in Europe
• for her first UK show → for her first show in the United Kingdom
• on American TV → on American television
• on American music TV → same as above

Critical reception

• received mostly positive reviews → ... from [[Music journalism|music critics]]
• Alex Panisch → you have already mentioned him, so only state "Panisch" here
• of the Norwegian publication of Gaffa → second "of" is superfluous

Commercial performance

• was the forty-ninth best-selling → was the 49th best-selling

Track listing

• flawless ;)

Personnel

• Credits and personnel for Truth Serum adapted from the Swedish edition of the EP. → Credits adapted from the Swedish version of Truth Serum

Charts

• flawless

Release histrory

• Unlink all labels and formats here

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 35.1% is acceptable!

Images

• All seems fine with that image ;)

Samples

• You need to add a use rationale for Truth Serum to the sample; as it stands now, it is only to be used on "Habits (Stay High)". See this as an example.

Links

• No problems here!

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
• 1 dead link! Please fix this!

Outcome

Great job on the article! Putting this  On hold for 7 days. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:00, 28 May 2017 (UTC)

@Cartoon network freak: I have addressed all of your comments! Thank you so much for reviewing this article. Have a nice day! --Paparazzzi (talk) 22:02, 28 May 2017 (UTC)

Gladly passing this! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:38, 29 May 2017 (UTC)

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