Talk:Tom Ochiltree

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Tigerboy1966 in topic My edits

My edits

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I have chopped the text up to make it a bit more approachable, but I'm not happy with it. The style is very different to the way I write and my attempt to divide the text into headed sections might not be appropriate Tigerboy1966 (talk) 16:28, 10 December 2011 (UTC)Reply