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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 21:52, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

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• Fantastic work!

Lead

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• "...is a song by Japanese recording artist Ayumi Hamasaki." --> "...is a song recorded by Japanese recording artist Ayumi Hamasaki."

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• "An accompanying music video was directed by Takahide Ishii, which has Hamasaki waiting at a taxi stand, and another scene with her as a marionette." --> "An accompanying music video was directed by Takahide Ishii, which displays Hamasaki waiting at a taxi stand, and another scene with her as a marionette."

Background and release

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• What about: "The song's instrumentation consists of piano and guitar by CMJK," --> "The song's instrumentation consists of piano and guitar by musician CMJK,"

Reception

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• "A staff member at CD Journal enjoyed the song, labelling it a "beautiful performance" by Hamasaki. The review also complimented the instrumentation and production, and how it "melted together comfortably".[4]" --> "A staff member at CD Journal enjoyed the song, labeling it a "beautiful performance" by Hamasaki; the reviewer also complimented the instrumentation and production, and how it "melted together comfortably".[4]"

Music video

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• "The accompanying music video was directed by Takahide Ishii." --> No source.

Promotion and live performances

• "The song was included on some of Hamasaki's concert tours, including her: 2007-2008 Anniversary tour, the 2010-2011: Do It Again tour, and the 2012-2013: Wake Me Up tour.[21]" --> "The song was included on some of Hamasaki's concert tours, including her: 2007-2008 Anniversary Tour, the 2010-2011: Do It Again Tour, and the 2012-2013: Wake Me Up Tour.[21]"

Charts and certifications

Monthly charts

• Did the single peak in 2007/08 or in 2016? The chart box reads 2016

End of GA Review:

A few changes, good luck! On hold for seven days. Thanks for the review! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 18:23, 28 June 2016 (UTC).

@Carbrera: Done and dusted CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 21:47, 28 June 2016 (UTC)