Talk:Toby Twirl

Latest comment: 3 months ago by 2001:8003:1405:3F00:51CF:FA8F:AAAB:7C75 in topic Severe editing required

Severe editing required edit

While there is initial material concerning Toby Twirl, the section about Sheila Hodgetts reads like a puff-piece in a magazine, complete with exclamation marks. She needs her own page as well (or instead of), but written with more facts and less opinion. Compare this article with that on Noddy and you'll see the difference. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2001:8003:1405:3F00:51CF:FA8F:AAAB:7C75 (talk) 02:20, 11 February 2024 (UTC)Reply