Talk:Tilbury Fort/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:15, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
Great, I would love to review one of your masterpieces. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:15, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
Fairly well-written as always, so these are mere nitpicks :) Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:37, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
- Most changes made, comments left on the others. Thanks for the review! Hchc2009 (talk) 20:07, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
- 16th century
- his wife, Catherine of Aragon Comma after "Aragon"
- You may consider converting tons, though it is not mandatory.
- James Nedeham and Christopher Morice Better add their professions to introduce them
- "Rampart" is linked twice
- 17th century
- sixty-six men in 1651 "66" would appear less wordy and better per WP:MOSNUM
- 18th–19th centuries
- I wonder if links are needed for "rainwater" and "cricket"
- 20th–21st centuries
- I don't think a hyphen is needed in "down-stream"
- Architecture
- under the direction of Sir Bernard de Gomme You can call him "de Gnomme" everywhere once you have introduced him
That should be it. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:37, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
Thanks for the changes. I am happy to promote this. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:41, 10 June 2016 (UTC)