Talk:Thomas Hall (mechanic)/GA2

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 08:35, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   Some minor issues (see below)

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

   See below

2. Is it verifiable with no original research?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   All jumbled up, but the MOS does not require any particular order

   B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Looks pretty good. A couple of very minor issues.

Issues

Mostly to demonstrate that I did check it.

• What are carpenders?
  •  Done
• Should "self adjusting" be "self-adjusting"?
  •  Done
• "Dr. H. S. Leskowitch " We normally leave out the "Dr." per MOS:HONORIFIC
  •  Done
• Any idea what his daughters' names were?
  •  Done No, looked everywhere. Only names able to find are the ones given in article.

    No worries. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 11:38, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

• Hawkeye7 (discuss) 08:35, 3 August 2022 (UTC): @Hawkeye7: All Issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:05, 3 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Passed. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 11:41, 3 August 2022 (UTC)

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