Talk:The Notorious K.I.M./GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Вик Ретлхед in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Вик Ретлхед (talk · contribs) 18:56, 19 September 2013 (UTC)Reply

Basic corrections

1) The intro doesn't summarize the entire content of the article, so it could use a slight expansion.
2) Since there's no composition section, the genres must be referenced.
3) You can write another paragraph in the "critical reception" mentioning the reviews by USA Today and others that were listed.
4) There should be explanation whether the samples and personnel were adapted from the liner notes or some other place.
5) The singles section could be also expanded. Take a look at Suit (album) to get the idea.
6) Split the charts and certifications into different sections. You can use the special table for the certs. And don't forget to add references for the chart positions.

Comment: Generally speaking, I'm concerned whether should I quick fail this. But since you've waited this long, I'll give you time to address the issues and then I will take another look.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 20:58, 19 September 2013 (UTC)Reply

Well then, the editor appears to be inactive in the last month and since the article needs a serious re-building, I'm closing the nomination as failed.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 06:44, 21 September 2013 (UTC)Reply