Talk:The Incentive/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by TBrandley in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
- Infobox: Use {{start date}} in templates for dates
- Infobox: No guest stars?
- Unfortunately, no one big enough.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
- Infobox: Link The Office?
- Lede: Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
- Lede: Same goes for showrunner
- Lede: NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC), as per MOS:ACRO
- Plot: Direct quotes need actual references
- I think I fixed this.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
- Production: "The official website for The Office" don't think that is important to subject. Perhaps remove.
- I kept it, as its in all the other articles. If I removed it, it would make no sense, and readers would question whether they were leaked or officially released.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
- Cultural references: Seems small. Expand, or merge with production
- It's a paragraph-sized section, and production and cultural references are two different things.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
- Reception: "%" → "percent"
- Reviews: Seems quotey. Consider paraphrasing, etc.
- I did a little copy-edit, please check it, which had some typos
- Looks good.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
- That's all, on hold for now. Good work.
- TBrandley 03:42, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
- Think I got everything. Thank you!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
- Yep. Article looks good now. Passing. Well done! TBrandley 03:59, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
- Think I got everything. Thank you!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:55, 8 September 2012 (UTC)