Talk:The Graduate (novel)
Latest comment: 9 years ago by ZootZootHoney in topic Plot Summary
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Plot Summary edit
This really needs work. I can see a lot of effort was put in to it, but it reads as if it were written by a non-native speaker.
ZootZootHoney (talk) 21:11, 25 April 2015 (UTC) Agreed. Some of it makes no sense, and the tenses are all over the place e.g. "After when Benjamin tells Elaine everything a couple seconds ago, she finally knows that her mother might be lying and questions for his future plans and says that she didn't want him to leave without it." I'm happy to edit for sense and tense if the owner allows - let me know! NB I have no idea who wrote the first sentence, above.