Talk:The Epic Split/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:11, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Can we replace the "n.a."s from the File:Epic Split Volvo Trucks commercial.png NFCC as "not applicable" is not an acceptable justification for any aspect.
• Lead could be expanded a touch. Could include agency and director in there...
• Not sure why "music "Only Time" by Enya.[2][3]" is the only thing needing a reference in the lead. If this non-contentious material is referenced in the main body then it doesn't need to go here.
• "Volvo Trucks - The Epic Split feat. Van" en-dash, not hyphen.
• "area.".[5] no need for double full stop.
• Merge the last two paras of the Content section.
• "Volvo Trucks called "Live Tests".[6]" any more than just one single sentence about this?
• "series called Live Test which" : previously this was called "Live Tests", not Live Test.
• "closed Ciudad Real Central Airport" our article calls it "International" rather than "Central"?
• "was done in a single take" captured instead of done perhaps?
• "Colour grading was done by" performed instead of done perhaps?
• "Enya's music "Only Time" " link these two in the main body here.
• "in the Live Test series" again, consistency in the format of this "series" of ads.
• "eleven Commandos are seen" why capital C?
• "as Walker, Texas Ranger performing" comma after Ranger.
• Consistency needed for reference date formats.
• "Volvo Trucks - The Epic Split" in ext links, en-dash.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:47, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man I think everything is  Done, please let me know if the article is okay like this. PhotographyEdits (talk) 20:45, 3 September 2021 (UTC)