Talk:The Coup (The Office)/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 21:05, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
- Intro: I would add air date
- Intro: Add acts after characters
- Intro: Call of Duty should be italicized
- Intro: Maybe link Stamford
- Plot: "he makes a reference to Entourage" Is this supported by a cite?
- Not sure (it was there before I got to the article). I've removed it. Ruby 2010/2013 00:13, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- Production: Maybe explain in a nutshell what Lady MacBeth did and how Angela was acting like that. It'd be cool if you put a free image of Lady MacBeth in the section too.
- Production: Link some of the character names, like Creed and Meredith, etc.
- References: Use consistent dating methods.
That's all the issues I can find. Images are good, and formatting is good. On hold.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:11, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
- I've made all the fixes. Good idea about Lady Macbeth -- let me know how the edits turned out! Ruby 2010/2013 00:13, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- Excellent. It all looks great. I moved the Lady MacBeth pic just so there isn't a huge white space, but other than that, looks good. I pass.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 19:01, 17 July 2012 (UTC)