Talk:The Boat Race 1995/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)

I'll review this soon. Seattle (talk) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)

Comments:

• Just linking years violates WP:EGG.
  • Fixed. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
• The President for Oxford is unknown?
  • Found it... "Jeremiah McLanahan, Oxford's American president...." The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
• Cambridge were coached by Robin Williams was reserved in his assessment not quite
  • Added missing word. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
• The Oxford crew contained two native British rowers to Cambridge's five,[12] Cambridge also saw the first rower from Croatia in the Boat Race, in Marko Banovic. I don't think a comma works well there, use a semi-colon.
  • Re-worded. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
• Although rating considerably lower than Oxford Can you link "rating" somewhere?
  • Ok. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)
• Do you know the sponsorship, on this or The Boat Race 1994?
  • Yep, Beefeater, so added it. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)

OK. Seattle (talk) 23:55, 6 August 2014 (UTC)

Many thanks, I've addressed all of your points I hope. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)