Talk:Texas Civil Rights Project

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Jacobnlloren in topic Wiki Education assignment: Technical Editing

Tone

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I have tagged for tone as the article uses too many promotional terms lifted from the organisation's own material. If the subject wasn't a charity, I'd probably tag the article as "peacock" but I don't want to be too hardass here. --DanielRigal (talk) 16:07, 29 June 2019 (UTC)Reply

Sources

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The main issues I'm seeing besides grammatical errors is that there's three missing sources. There's no sources for the immigrant victims services section and the veterans services section. I will try to look into it but if I can't find any sources, I'll try to rewrite it. Same goes for the [citation needed] part of the History section. Also, when you hover over the [see Disability Campaign below] part in the Disability rights section, nothing pops up so I think it's outdated and either needs to be removed or updated with a new hyperlink. Jacobnlloren (talk) 06:30, 22 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: Technical Editing

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 18 January 2023 and 5 May 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jacobnlloren (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by Jacobnlloren (talk) 08:26, 6 March 2023 (UTC)Reply