Talk:Tere Mere Beech

Nadia’s personality: POV problems

Hi! I’ve noticed a few parts of the description for the character, Nadia, which seems to conflict with Wikipedia’s neutral point of view policy. The problematic part of the description reads as follows:

She becomes angry very quickly and has a sharp tongue. Overall, she is a good sister and tries to help her sisters out as much as she can.

This contains four statements which do not seem neutral:

1. Nadia becoming angry very quickly;
2. Nadia having a sharp tongue;
3. Nadia being a good sister;
4. Nadia trying to help her sisters out as much as she can.

Either these should be cited, or they should be removed.

If anyone has any opinions, please let me know.

Thanks!

Noah Kastin (talk) 10:08, 25 March 2017 (UTC)

Asad’s personality: POV problems

Hi! I’ve noticed a few parts of a sentence describing Asad which seems to conflict with Wikipedia’s neutral point of view policy. The problematic sentence reads as follows:

Asad is the brother of Ali and a very sharp tongued man.

This contains a statement which does not seem neutral:

Asad is a sharp tongued man.

Either this should be cited, or it should be removed.

If anyone has any opinions, please let me know.

Thanks!

Noah Kastin (talk) 05:24, 28 March 2017 (UTC)

This discussion is no longer relevant, as this edit removed the sentence in question. Noah Kastin (talk) 03:38, 6 April 2017 (UTC)