Talk:Telok Ayer MRT station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:54, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Downtown/Circle - is it Line or line, there seems to be inconsistency in usage here and in those articles too.
  •  Done
• "raxi" you mean taxi?
  •  Fixed
• "the Land Transport Authority " link.
• Put (LTA) after it too as you use that.
  •  both done
• "the 3.4 kilometres (2.1 mi) Downtown" adj=on
  •  Fixed
• "Downtown Extension" was "Downtown extension" in the lead.
  •  Fixed
• "Samsung Corporation and Soletanche Bachy France" links?
  • There's a link to Samsung Corporation but it seems no page has been created for Soletanche Bachy France, despite it being a rather prominent company (plenty of search results). A French version exists.--ZKang123 (talk) 12:28, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
• "viaduct began on 3 February 2008[14] and the viaduct opened " repetitive.
  •  Done
• "opened over time" vague, almost meaningless.
  •  Fixed With specifications on the period.--ZKang123 (talk) 12:28, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
• "the diaphragm walls adopted" link?
  •  Done
• "proceed to line" proceeded.
  • Shortened to just "lined". Proceeded seems unnecessary.--ZKang123 (talk)
• "largely yellow palms" largely? And is there a link for "yellow palm"?
  •  Fixed
• "Downtown line (DTL) and" you mentioned the Downtown line in the previous section, so put the initialism (DTL) there, and use it here.
  •  Done
• "and Chinatown stations" overlinked.
  •  Done
• "including Far East Bank Building" etc, "including the Far East..."
  •  Done
• "blends with the other shophouses" shouldn't be Wikipedia saying this, it may have been designed to blend, but that is in the eye of the beholder.
  •  Done used "intended".--ZKang123 (talk) 12:28, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
• "reflecting the design's functionality that remains appealing to commuters" guidebook.
  •  Fixed
• Check all refs have publication and/or access dates.
  •  Fixed
• Ref 24 should be pp.
  •  Fixed

That's all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:08, 29 August 2021 (UTC)