Talk:Tejano Music Award for Female Vocalist of the Year/GA1
Latest comment: 8 years ago by AJona1992 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:21, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
edit- All good!
Lead
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edit- "The Tejano Music Awards, first bestowed in 1981, were established to recognize the most talented performers of the genre—a subcategory of regional Mexican music, with roots in the music of early European settlers in Texas.[1]" --> "The Tejano Music Awards, first bestowed in 1981, was established to recognize the most talented performers of the genre—a subcategory of regional Mexican music, with roots in the music of early European settlers in Texas.[1]" (The awards show itself is singular, so "were" becomes "was".)
- Done
Paragraph 2
edit- "Selena holds the record for most wins, winning 11 of 12 nominations. " --> "Selena holds the record for most wins, winning 11 of her 12 nominations. "
- Done
Background and nomination process
edit- Great! :)
Recipients
edit- Caption change: "American singer Jennifer Peña, winner in 1999, 2001, and 2003." --> "Tejano singer Jennifer Peña, winner in 1999, 2001, and 2003."
- Done
Paragraph 1
edit- "who had a U.S. Billboard Regional Mexican Airplay number one single..." --> "who had a US Billboard Regional Mexican Airplay number one single..."
- Done
- I realize "grupos" is "groups", but what do you mean when you state it?
- Rest is fantastic!
End of GA Review:
editShort and sweet and well–written! Great work! On hold for seven days, although I'm sure you'll finish them ASAP. Contact me if you need anything, thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 03:29, 23 June 2016 (UTC).