Talk:Tatsu/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:21, 26 September 2013 (UTC)

Comments first quick comments

• Is it Tatsu or Tatsu?
• " at the 34 position" -> "placed 34th."
• If written in USEng, "rumours" should be "rumors" right?
• Should "summer" really be capitalised?
• "were later found" they existed, so what do you mean by "later found"? Like ancient artefacts?
• Is it "Flying" or "flying" roller coaster?
  • Flying Coaster is the B&M model name; flying roller coaster is the general type of roller coaster.--Dom497 (talk) 00:55, 2 October 2013 (UTC)
• Infobox, 1600 riders -> 1,600 riders to be consistent with other values above 999 in the box.
• "at position 34 in its opening year and peaked at position 30" no need to use "position" here in my opinion.

The Rambling Man (talk) 16:42, 30 September 2013 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: I have addressed all your comments.--Dom497 (talk) 00:56, 2 October 2013 (UTC)