Talk:Sydney Opera House Grand Organ
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editAccording to the PDF specification provided, the organ has at least two swell boxes, or enclosed divisions. It appears that one of them may be double-enclosed. The swell box has two sets of shades with separate expression shoes - one set opens into the room and the other is on the back of the swell box toward the curved wall - stunning effects are possible with this system.
This is two posts. The first consists of two sentences [1] and seems to misunderstand the specification (as did I <blush> when I first worked on the article, so it was actually a useful contribution of sorts). The reply [2] appears to be original research. Neither is encyclopedic, but both contain information that, if properly sourced and added in the right place, would enhance the article. Andrewa (talk) 13:18, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
World's largest organ?
editThe first sentence in the article is ambiguous:
The Sydney Opera House Grand Organ is the world's largest mechanical tracker-action pipe organ by Ronald Sharp, located in the concert hall of Sydney Opera House in Sydney, Australia.
There are (at elast) two possible meanings:
- This is the world's largest mechanical tracker-action pipe organ. It is built by Ronald Sharp.
- This is the largest mechanical tracker-action pipe organ that Ronald Sharp has ever built.
I believe that the former is the intent. If that is the case, I propose to break the sentence into two sentences for clarity:
The Sydney Opera House Grand Organ is the world's largest mechanical tracker-action pipe organ. It is built by Ronald Sharp and located in the concert hall of Sydney Opera House in Sydney, Australia.
Before this change is made, I would like to hear comments from the Wiki community. Truthanado (talk) 18:19, 2 March 2013 (UTC)
- Absolutely agree, except that maybe the second sentence should be
- It was built by Ronald Sharp and is located in the Concert Hall of the Sydney Opera House in Sydney, Australia. --Machina.sapiens (talk) 04:29, 3 March 2013 (UTC)