Talk:Soviet cruiser Vasily Chapayev/GA1

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Simongraham in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 13:47, 15 December 2022 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:47, 15 December 2022 (UTC)Reply

  • Images properly licensed
  • Link project number (List of ships of Russia by project number) in the lede
    • Linked.
  • including Project 68bis insert "the"
    • Added.
  • Move the links for class and cruiser to their first appearance in the lede
    • Linked.
  • Suggest using a colon after NATO reporting name
    • Added for all instances.
  • Add hyphen between high and pressure
    • Added
  • Link bridge, hangar
    • Linked.
  • in two barrel loaders ??
    • Clarified.
  • Explain or delete L/80 (personally, I save caliber lengths for the class article, but that's just me)
    • Removed.
  • Retitle the Electronic warfare section as Sensors and electronic warfare
    • Amended. I have also adjusted the other section titles so that they are consistent with other articles (like Japanese battleship Ise)
  • Change the link and name for radome to Bulbous bow#Sonar dome
    • Changed.
  • Serial number? Do you mean yard number?
    • Yes. Edited.
  • Give the codenames for the Project 877 sub and the 1134B cruiser --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:10, 29 December 2022 (UTC)Reply
    • Added. I have also added the NATO codenames for the other vessels mentioned in the lead and body.

@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. I believe that I have made the changes. Please tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 16:18, 30 December 2022 (UTC)Reply