Talk:Sol, Arena y Mar/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:43, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

Initial comments:

• On the talk page, I would include it under the "WikiProject Jazz" since you cited jazz as a genre
• In the infobox, generally the first genre is capitalized so I would capitalize the first 'p' in "pop"
• In "horn-driven uptempo pop song", I would suggest linking "pop" to "Pop music"
• "The single was released in four versions of the song" --> Could you reword this? I think it sounds choppy because both "single" and "song" are used
• "pop recordings" --> I'd also like pop here
• Just a suggestion: "He denied..." --> "He also denied..."
• "and Arturo Perez.[9][1]" --> "and Arturo Perez.[1][9]"
• "Miguel handling the productions himself." --> I don't think "production" needs to be plural; I only think you need to refer to the song itself and not the album
• "foam at the seashore".[13][8]" --> "foam at the seashore".[8][13]"
• "Houston Chronicle critic Joey Guerra chided the tune as a "tepid mix of blaring horns and uninspired lyrics"[12]" --> You need a period at the end of this sentence as it is currently incomplete

ON HOLD – good, solid work as always. Ping me with questions. Thank you, Carbrera (talk) 02:17, 13 May 2017 (UTC).

@Carbrera: Thanks for the review Carbera. I believe I've addressed everything that you brought up. It's a shame that I couldn't make it to the next round of the WikiCup though. :( Erick (talk) 03:27, 13 May 2017 (UTC)

Magiciandude – Oh no! That is a shame! You're so good at expanding articles related to latin music! It's so nice to see your passion come alive in your articles! My best wishes; hope all is good. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 04:22, 13 May 2017 (UTC).