Talk:Socony–Mobil Building/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 21:44, 3 May 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I'm Kingsif, and I'll be doing this review. This is an automated message that helps keep the bot updating the nominated article's talkpage working and allows me to say hi. Feel free to reach out and, if you think the review has gone well, I have some open GA nominations that you could (but are under no obligation to) look at. Kingsif (talk) 21:44, 3 May 2020 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

• Images licensed, and they're nice images
• Talk page clear, possible minor edit dispute yesterday from other editors?
• Possibly some close paraphrasing detected on Earwig from [s-media.nyc.gov/agencies/lpc/lp/2117.pdf here] (ignoring all the proper nouns and quotes, still)
  • Fixed - might have gotten carried away with that source. epicgenius (talk) 23:27, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
• Different infobox but still seems fine
  • Yeah, this is not an NRHP site, so that is why a different infobox is used. epicgenius (talk)
• Is "rosettes" a special architectural term that needs a link or not?
  • Linked.
• I don't know if "lessee" should be leessee, leassee... or renter/tenant?
  • Lessee if they are leasing the property itself, tenant if they are leasing space in the property. epicgenius (talk) 23:27, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
• Little fix needed in required that all visitors and employees to sign in
  • Done.
• Repetition of 'time' in at which time it was cleaned for the first time, could change the first instance to 'point'
  • Done.
• Perhaps a less-emotive word than "balked" could be used?
  • Done.

Overall

• on hold A few things Kingsif (talk) 23:18, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
  • @Kingsif: Thanks again. I did these. epicgenius (talk) 23:27, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
    • No problem - nice to have a quick-response nominator :) Kingsif (talk) 23:38, 3 May 2020 (UTC)