Talk:So High School/GA1

Latest comment: 3 days ago by Brachy0008 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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I... feel so high school, everytime I review an article. I... wanna pass this, in... [pun abruptly ends]

Nominator: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 08:07, 14 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Brachy0008 (talk · contribs) 23:39, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Ippantekina have you started working on the comments yet? brachy08 (chat here lol) 00:07, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Brachy0008: not yet, I'll get back to you and try to get this done within 10 days or less. Ippantekina (talk) 02:56, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
alr. i’ll be back in ten days (or when all the issues are resolved) brachy08 (chat here lol) 02:57, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Copyvios

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  • Violation unlikely (20.0%, without Google search)

Sourcing

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Background and composition

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  • FN2: Does not show that Taylor wrote songs for TTPD during the US leg of the Eras Tour.
  • FN3: Only says that The Anthology was released at 2am, does not say that TTPD was released on April 19.
  • Will check on FN4 later.
  • FN13: No mention of touches of dream pop just realised its under a paywall, will check later.
  • FN18, FN21: Does not mention anything about the dynamic of the relationship, only talking about Travis.
FN 15
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Didn't we talk about Fearless earlier before touching into a lyrical motif that evokes Swift's Fearless songs like "You Belong with Me" or "Fifteen". Not sure about that, tho I'd (optional):

  • Remove and People's Jack Irvin labelled "So High School" a sonic throwback to Swift's 2008 album Fearless.
  • a lyrical motif that evokes Swift's Fearless songs like "You Belong with Me" or "Fifteen".;Jack Irvin of People labeled the song as a sonic throwback to Swift's 2008 album Fearless, evoking songs from it, like "You Belong with Me" or "Fifteen".

You can paraphrase it if you would like to.

Critical reception

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So far, so good.

  • Will check on FN9 and FN24 later.

Commercial performance

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  • FN 35: Where does it say that "So High School" reached 35 on sales charts?
  • FN 37: "So High School" is not on the list. Please Please Please don't prove that it did not chart on the IFPI at all. (i know this is sabrina carpenter, but who cares?)

File review

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  • The audio sample is 18s seconds long. Fits the 10% limit of the audio sample.

Other comments

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  • Personnel section is not sourced.

Overalls

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Great read, has the potential to become a GA. I will be back with a bit more comments, but these are the only comments I can do for now. (which is most of them, if not all)