Talk:Six Feet Under (Billie Eilish song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 14:28, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

DarklyShadows I'm happy to see that you've unblocked yourself. I'll start my review soon. LOVI33 14:28, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lead

• Cover art needs alt text.
• "Finneas O'Connell wrote and solely" → "Finneas O'Connell, Eilish's brother, solely wrote and"
• Maybe add something about it's lyrical content after the pop ballad mention.
• "it was certified platinum in Canada by Music Canada (MC)" → "Commercially, it was certified platinum by Music Canada (MC)"

Background and composition

• "on Soundcloud" → "through Eilish's SoundCloud"
• "Eilish's second ever single." → "her second single."
• "According to sheet music website Musicnotes.com" → "According sheet music published by Hal Leonard Music Publishing on Musicnotes.com" with target
• Target A₃ to A (musical note)
• Target D₅ to D (musical note)
• "The song has been" → "The song is"
• "and delicate as" → "and delicate like"
• "Lyrics include: "Help, I lost myself again/But I remember you/Don’t come back; it won’t end well/But I wish you’d tell me too."[7]" this sentence seems redundant as you are not analyzing the lyrics. Remove it.

Reception

• "When it was released" → "Upon it's release"
• ""Six Feet Under" has been awarded" → "The song has been awarded"
• Remove Music Canada from the last sentence, already mentioned in previous sentence

Promotion

• "The music video was directed by Eilish. The video shows" → "It was directed by Eilish and shows"
• [14][2] refs need to be in numerical order
• ""Six Feet Under" was used in" → "The song was used in"

Track Listing

• Change title to "Track listing"
• "Remix EP" → "Digital EP – Remixes" with target
• Add total length for Remix EP

Personnel

• Target Tidal to Tidal (service)

Certifications

• MOS:TABLECAPTION, probably: Certifications and sales for "Six Feet Under"

References

• Make sure all these are archived using the tool
• Copyvio score looks good at 20.6%
• I think you misspelled the authors name in ref 5
• Target YouTube to itself in ref 14
• Target NME to itself in ref 15
• Remove target to iTunes in ref 17

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until issues are fixed. It was great reviewing one of your articles again. I hope to do another soon! LOVI33 19:41, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

LOVI33 All the problems should be addressed! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 21:51, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

Great, I'll pass it now! LOVI33 22:47, 13 July 2020 (UTC)