Talk:School of Advanced Military Studies/GA2
Latest comment: 11 years ago by Casprings in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Cerebellum (talk · contribs) 18:12, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
Hello! I will be reviewing this article. --Cerebellum (talk) 18:12, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- The article is very well referenced.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- I still have a few questions after reading the article, as listed in the comments, but still pretty good coverage of the topic.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Yes, no criticism of the subject is presented but no one seems to be criticizing it either.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Wow, this article has been heavily scrutinized! It's clearly benefitted from the attention though and it now meets the GA criteria. I am happy to close this review as pass. I've left some comments below as suggestions for further improvement. --Cerebellum (talk) 20:00, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
Comments
edit- one of three United States Army schools that make up the United States Army Command and General Staff College - United States Army Command and General Staff College lists four schools; is this correct?
- Infobox: Have you considered adding {{Infobox military unit}} to the article, like at United States Army Command and General Staff College and Joint Forces Staff College? If you don't want to do that, perhaps at least move the photo of the crest to the lead like at United States Army War College.
- Prose: In the first paragraph of the "history" section, it's not clear what following the Vietnam War refers to. It could mean either that there was a gap in U.S. military education following the Vietnam War or that the War College focused on grand strategy and national security policy following the Vietnam War, or perhaps both.
- Coverage: Wass de Czege and two other U.S. Army officers planned and developed the school - who were these other two officers?
- History: What was LTG Richardson's position at Fort Leavenworth? And can you provide his first name?
- History: For the sake of context, why was the school regarded as a risky endeavour in its early years? Also, just to make sure we are offering balanced coverage, are there any who still criticize it?
- History: domestic contingencies, such as those in Los Angeles and Miami after Hurricane Katrina - I don't understand, what contingencies does this refer to?
- A reference to Defense Support of Civil authorities missions. Basically, DOD providing support to domestic authorities. Casprings (talk) 03:52, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
- Course and facilities - The quote box in this section is a little strange. It's not clear that von Schlieffen is the source of the quote and I'm not sure why The motto selected to describe the SAMS graduate is in quotation marks.
- I agree. Basically it was trying to convey sort of an unofficial motto. However, it is a bit strange there.
- Course and facilities - The second and third paragraphs seem a bit redundant - they contain overlapping information about the student body. Also, what are the "summer classes", and do they differ from the main program?
- Basically they take in two classes a year, a larger summer class and a smaller winter class. It is a reference to the start time of each course. I will edit those paragraphs some.
- Female students - Why is the line about the course being co-ed in the footnotes? If it is necessary at all, it should be in the article body.
- Agreed. Removed it.
- Citations - The citation style for the Bower references is inconsistent, The Lamp is italicized in one but not in the other.