Talk:Say You Will (Kanye West song)/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Kyle Peake in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Shoot for the Stars (talk · contribs) 22:28, 23 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Will review this as soon as I get school and graduation out of the way. Shoot for the Stars 💫 (talk) 22:28, 23 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Background and recording

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I think the "Outside of the song, English musician Mr Hudson co-wrote fellow 808s & Heartbreak track "Street Lights" and contributed a feature to "Paranoid" sentence should come way later as this would be confusing to readers who don't know anything about Kanye or his songs. What song are you talking about when you say "outside of the song"?

It is only referring to Mr Hudson's contributions to songs on the album, which is already introduced as being by West in the lead... plus background for musicians is supposed to come first in this section. Change the song to "Say You Will", though. --K. Peake 08:33, 2 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Music and lyrics

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  • musicOMH does not say the song has "synth-pop production" but the rather the whole album.

Release and reception

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This part "The song was met with generally positive reviews from music critics, mostly being identified by them as an album highlight" needs to be referenced.

  • The guideline about combining multiple points to reach a conclusion not explicitly stated by them does not apply when its a reception section, as it can be seen how much of the reviews are positive/negative so you can write that. --K. Peake 08:33, 2 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

References

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  • copyvio score says it's 95.8% from some bs [1] website! Lets just ignore that crap. The score is below 40% and looks fine.
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Overall

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Putting   On hold for seven days. You know I'm shooting for the stars, aiming for the moon 💫 (talk) 22:16, 1 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Shoot for the Stars I have responded to all of your points above. --K. Peake 08:33, 2 June 2021 (UTC)Reply