Talk:Sandro Mamukelashvili/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:06, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

Going to be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:06, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Wikilink points per game
  • Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

Early life and high school career

• Wikilink Soviet national basketball team to Soviet Union women's national basketball team
  • Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
• "He competed on the U17, U18 and U19 teams and helped to finish third place in the national finals." - helped whom?
  • The Teams. Clarified. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
• "and introduced him to several NBA players like Stephen Curry." - such as
  • Rephrased. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
• Wikilink NBA
  • Ok. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
• "He speaks English, Georgian, Russian, and Italian." - can be He is fluent in
  • Probably various levels of fluency, but changed. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

College career

• Wiklink the first mention of the terms points, rebound and blocks to help non-Basketball readers
  • Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
• "In the summer of 2019," - avoid mentioning seasons per MOS:SEASON
  • Changed to "Following his sophomore season." ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
• "while making 61% of his shots from the field and 60% from behind the arc." - should be percent per MOS:PERCENT
  • OK. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
• "but did not hire an agent." - Wikilink agent to Sports agent
  • Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

National team career

• "In the summer of 2018," - avoiding using seasons
  • Changed to "July 2018". ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:48, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

Career statstics

• The table of his college stats should be referenced to reliable sources
  • Cited to SportsReference. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:48, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

Am going to place the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 17:14, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

• Have addressed your concerns. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:48, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
  • @Editorofthewiki: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 21 April 2020 (UTC)