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in the sanchore surname also katariya sanghavi, burd, sanghavi,please check and send the cerrect detail
sanchore's old name sataypure —Preceding unsigned comment added by 59.176.58.237 (talk) 05:30, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
Note: {{WP India}} Project Banner with Rajasthan workgroup parameters was added to this article talk page because the article falls under Category:Rajasthan or its subcategories. Should you feel this addition is inappropriate , please undo my changes and update/remove the relavent categories to the article -- TinuCherian (Wanna Talk?) - 09:17, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
copyediting
editI have looked at the first several sections, but the remainder will most likely need to be rewritten. Unfortunately, there is not a lot of info on the web about this town, so it would best be done by an expert or someone who has access to the necessary info. --Soulparadox 00:58, 10 May 2012 (UTC)
Tried to edit and clean up
editThis article is a very tough nut to crack for a number of reasons. First, the article itself appears to have been written by a non-English speaker, which makes clear grammatical correction difficult. Second, the article appears to have been written by a member of the town's chamber of commerce. Third, there are many regional-specific acronyms and designations in the article which are not readily translatable.
I concur with the prior talk page comment - a subject matter expert needs to clean up this article. Dkendr (talk) 14:57, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
Deletions
editIn process of copy-editing, I removed quite a few POV and theoretical statements from this article; it doesn't require an expert on India to remove unencyclopedic claims. Even so, I did not remove all of them, requesting quantification on a few. I minimized description of the initiatives of the state of Rajasthan because this is an article about Sanchore, and those initiatives are only important to this article as they impact Sanchore. I also removed a number of claims for which a citation has been requested since 2010. Richigi (talk) 06:00, 23 December 2012 (UTC)