Talk:Sadie Harris/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 06:26, 22 July 2012 (UTC)

Issues

General

• No dab links. Great work!
• No dead links. Great work!

Infobox

• Nothing, really.

Lede

• Unlink fictional character per WP:OVERLINK
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
• "series' producer" isn't it "series creator". Also, with the '.
  • She is also a producer. I chose the word 'producer' because if I said "the character was created by series creator" it would sound redundant. I don't know what you mean by "with '."

Storylines

• "Harris and Meredith give each other nicknames; "Die" and "Death" respectively." citation/reference needed
  • Per WP:TVPLOT, the episode is the reference. TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
• "The surgery goes wrong however and Harris' life is seriously endangered, though fortunately she is rescued by the residents." citation/reference needed
  • Per WP:TVPLOT, the episode is the reference. TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
• "Some time" isn't needed
  •  Done, reworded. TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
• "claims responsibility for the appendectomy". Awkward
  •  Done, rephrased. TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
• Meredith should be Grey, as per WP:MOS. Same for various others
  • Meredith and Lexie share the same last name, which is why they are referred to by first name throughout the article. TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
• Link Europe
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)

Development

• you really don't - that's the rule in this town." after don't should be an en-dash rather than a regular -.
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
• Too many "of" in the "Characterization" section. Consider re-prashing. Eg: "Writing for Entertainment Weekly, Michael Ausiello"
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)

Reception

• There are no issues. Congrats!

External links

• Add link to the Grey's Anatomy Wiki episode link.
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 03:34, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
• Remove ABC Grey's Anatomy link. This is about the character, not the show
  •  Done, TRLIJC19 (talk) 03:34, 24 July 2012 (UTC)

Will finish the rest later tonight. For now this is it. TBrandley 00:42, 24 July 2012 (UTC)

All done or replied to. TRLIJC19 (talk) 01:36, 24 July 2012 (UTC)