Talk:SL79/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 00:54, 20 November 2009 (UTC)
Comments:

1. The sentence "The trams can seat 77 passengers, with an additional 91 people able to stand, with seating three and four abreast." sounds fragmented and needs to be reworded.
2. "Trams no. 101 through 113 was put into service" sounds awkward.
3. Combine the sentences "The first vehicle was delivered on 4 August 1989 and was taken into service on 11 October. The last was put into service on 27 August 1990."
4. Remove comma and the word "so" in sentence "Series two was delivered with vandal-proof seats, that proved so uncomfortable that they quickly were replaced."
5. The entire article relies on only three references. Are there any other additional references that can be added?

I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 00:54, 20 November 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I added a few more sources, but the three existing articles are about as reliable as it gets (two featured articles in a magazine plus the actual delivery brochure from the manufacturer). Arsenikk ^(talk) 12:35, 20 November 2009 (UTC)

I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 16:33, 20 November 2009 (UTC)