Talk:Roger B. Chaffee/GA1

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Hawkeye7 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 21:45, 25 November 2016 (UTC)Reply


  • I am picking this one up... but there is a lot of work to be done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:45, 25 November 2016 (UTC)Reply


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    See below
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    All images have appropriate licences
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
Comments

Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:33, 25 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

Working through these. Kees08 (talk) 01:57, 26 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

@Hawkeye7: I have gone through all of your comments now. Let me know if you have any additional comments, replies to my comments, etc. Thanks! Kees08 (talk) 19:42, 26 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

I've added a bit, and goone over it one more time. Passing now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:21, 26 November 2016 (UTC)Reply
One important change: I could find no evidence that Chaffee was a test pilot (ie graduated from Patuxent), so I have removed it from the bio. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:38, 26 November 2016 (UTC)Reply