Talk:Riegelmann Boardwalk/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:06, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• "The modified-chevron..." no need for the hyphen.
• "20 feet.[9][3][4] " convert and reorder refs.
• "the piles.[10][4]" order again.
• Is there a link for Tuscan column?
• "Comfort stations" this is euphemism for toilets?
• " 6 a.m. to 9 p.m. each day, except during summers when cycling is curtailed after 10 a.m" non-breaking spaces between hours and am/pm.
• "Original "Fifth Avenue" style " reuse the hyphen from the above caption here, thus "Original "Fifth Avenue"-style "
• "minor-league" is this hyphen needed? Isn't minor league baseball a thing?
• "original Luna Park" perhaps put "original" into the link to clearly distinguish between both "Luna Park" links.
• "Boardwalk.[21][18]" ref order.
• "listing.[25][24] " ditto.
• Link "carousel" (you link rollercoaster so....)
• "F.J. Kelly" space between F & J.
• Check for overlinking on the names of the attractions (Luna Park etc)
• "New York City.<[59] " spare <
• I see the caption "A "comfort station" along " puts comfort station in quotes...
• " cost $20 million" inflate?
• "with sand.[139][135]" order.
• No need to link hot dog.
• "The First Symphony of the Sea" if this is the name of a piece of art, shouldn't it be in italics?
• "as well as in albums such" do you mean it is mentioned in such albums?
• "as well as in albums such" order.
• Ref 17, spaced hyphen should be an en-dash.

That's all I have. I'm somewhat surprised how long this one has been waiting given its excellent condition already! On hold. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 14:32, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

The Rambling Man, thanks for the review. I have now fixed all of these. Comfort stations - yes, they are restrooms. epicgenius (talk) 15:38, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Marvellous, promoting. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 07:32, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

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