Talk:Rhythm Inside (Loïc Nottet song)/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:53, 14 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 15:53, 14 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • "Previously, Nottet had participated in native singing competition The Voice Belgique in 2014" - in his
  • "for his Selfocracy Tour (2017-2018)." - en dash is needed in place of the hyphen

Background and composition

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  • "Belgian singer Loïc Nottet rose to fame after finishing second in native singing competition The Voice Belgique in 2014," - became prominent after finishing second in his native
  • "Another editor of Wiwibloggs pointed out" - mentioned

Critical reception and accolades

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  • "Music critics received "Rhythm Inside" with positive responses." - positively received "Rhythm Inside".

Music videos

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  • "although it had been since deleted." - has
  • "the clip was first broadcast on Belgian television La Une." - television channel
  • "According to Chris Haplin of Wiwibloggs, the clip "focuses on opposites and fighting conceptions, with shots including two young girls: one a beauty queen, the other playing with dinosaurs" - needs to be sourced
  • "the woman awakens again and proceeds into leaving the building." - to leave the building.
  • "she finds a clock on one tree" - on a tree

In Vienna

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  • "They occasionally perform choreography in form" - in the form
  • "Michael Cragg pointed out that Nottet" - drew attention
  • Italise The Guardian as it is a print publication

Points awarded to Belgium

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  • Remove the link to the word "Netherlands" since its already linked in the previous sub-section

References

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  • References 47 & 50 should be spelt as ESCToday like in ref 35
  • Remove eurovision.tv in Reference 49
  • The author is missing from references 10, 14, 48, 49, 51, 53 and 62

That's my lot. MWright96 (talk) 18:06, 14 October 2018 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: Thank you very much for reviewing the article! I have implemented all your suggestions, except there were no authors given in refs 48 and 62. Greetings  ! ; Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:36, 14 October 2018 (UTC)Reply