Talk:Republican Party (Brazil)

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Tetizeraz in topic Notes on copyedit

Notes on copyedit

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  • "Having been temporary members of the Nacional Democratic Union (UDN), they announced their withdrawal from the UDN on August 14, 1945" Who is "they"?
  • "The party elected..." this is wrong, in an election only voters can elect. The only way a party would elect is if members of the party are voting on who will be their leader. Ways to express what you mean in English include: "the party won XX seats/mandates", "the party's results increased/decreased to XX seats", "finished with XX seats", "lost seats compared to the last election", "voters elected # representatives from the party", etc.
  • "Economically, the party advocated..." in this paragraph you need to be clear what is a direct quote. (t · c) buidhe 07:19, 5 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
@Buidhe: I tried to clarifying your first point. Thanks for the copyedit! User:Tetizeraz. Send me a ✉️ ! 20:57, 5 April 2021 (UTC)Reply