Talk:Reception of unaccompanied minors from the Northern Triangle
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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Isator920. Peer reviewers: Maamari.
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Karime Maamari Peer Review
editGreat job on your article, it looks great and has a very good amount of information. A couple pieces of criticism would be that it could use more visual representation in that you could add more pictures. Also, sometimes it came off as journalistic instead of encyclopedic, but the number of references you utilized do a great job of validating all of your statements. Last piece of advice would be to strengthen the intro a bit. I feel like some more substance could be added to give some insight into what is to come. All in all it was very well crafted and flows very well.