Talk:Progressive dinner
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merge
editmerge with PartyMercurywoodrose (talk) 21:54, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
Doesn't sound like an encyclopedia article - needs cleanup
editThere are phrases that make it sound like an article in a home magazine instead of a factual source, and there are just things in general that need cleanup.
-More places need citations, such as: " This style of eating has recently become popular as a charity fund raiser in rural Britain, and is seen as a good way of meeting different neighbors in the community by virtue of each participant having 6 separate guests; it also has a long tradition in the United States."
-Get rid of image file names
-Rewrite in a matter that doesn't sound like an advertisement or anything like that
-"Safari Suppers can always be used as a way of dating..." doesn't belong in references.
75.134.184.190 (talk) 01:02, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
Sounds not very third person
editLike the message above, this article needs a clean up as it wrote 'Although it is a little difficult to explain' which makes it sound as if someone it talk face to face with somebody else.72.53.147.104 (talk) 18:44, 24 April 2013 (UTC)