Talk:Pikes Hotel/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Pks1142 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pks1142 (talk · contribs) 04:24, 20 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • Yachtsman and former hat maker Pike led a very colourful life, which had already seen him shipwrecked in the Caribbean, injured in a bobsleigh accident, serving in the military, indulge in heavy drinking, and married and divorced three times.
What this means? How this is related to the history?

A brief background of his colourful life I think is important for understanding the colorful history of the hotel. The hotel history is closely related to his personality and the hedonism at the hotel. ♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 21:50, 21 April 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • According to me, the Description of video is not necessary.
I've trimmed it a bit, but I think the context is relevant.
  • Pike who described Mercury as "the most beautiful person I've ever met in my life. So entertaining and generous." Is it a Biographical page of Mercury?
Trimmed that out and the stuff about him seeking comfort, but the party details are relevant to the hotel and are interesting.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 21:55, 21 April 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • At many places, it sounds like a biographical page of Pike (person) in the history section.
  • Overall: The article meets the GA criteriaPrashant talk 21:21, 21 April 2013 (UTC)Reply


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

The article meets the criteria. Hence, passing it.Prashant talk 02:37, 22 April 2013 (UTC)Reply