Talk:Peter Taylor (footballer, born 1928)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:09, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:09, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

General

• No copyvio/dablink/external link issues
• There are a few duplicate links, but I think they should be retained as they are relevant in their respective places.

Playing career

• It was at Middlesbrough that Taylor first met Brian Clough, who was then fourth-choice striker at Ayresome Park Maybe add a few words on what his relevance would be in Taylor's future (present as of now)?
  • OK, I had thought about it.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
• You can put ref 7 at the end of the queue of all the lines it supports in para 2
  • OK.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
• It proved to Storey's final season proved to "be"
  • Done.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Management career

• In the Third Round of the FA Cup...knocked out by Manchester United. Looks unsourced
  • Sourced now.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Death

• of pulmonary fibrosis I think it should come earlier in the sentence.
  • Yeah, have changed it around.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Statistics

• • What exactly is the source for Managerial statistics?

I found a source for it now.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, this can be promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:07, 23 June 2016 (UTC)