Talk:Overlook Park station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:49, 20 September 2019 (UTC)

Comments

• Looks odd to just have that one ref in the lead, move it out to the place you expand upon the details in the main body.
  • Done. --Truflip99 (talk) 19:28, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
• Where is postal address referenced?
  • Not sure about this one, this was added by someone else. I can omit it, but putting the address on Google Maps takes you to the correct location. Although I'm not sure why a street median light rail station would be assigned a postal address... What do you think? --Truflip99 (talk) 19:28, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
    • I think that all adds up to it being removed unless you can provide an RS for it! The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 19:36, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
• " Interstate MAX extension" is that a thing? Is there an article?
  • Yes. Interstate MAX is synonymous with the Yellow Line. They share the same article. Clarified. --Truflip99 (talk) 19:28, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
• For your season (Autumn), is it fall or Fall? Be consistent.
  • Done. --Truflip99 (talk) 19:28, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
• "approved in June" that year. or June 1999.
  • Done. --Truflip99 (talk) 19:28, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
• "the relocation of Overlook Park station's planned northbound platform to be closer" no need for "be", either the "location ... to be closer" or the "relocation ... to closer".
  • Done. --Truflip99 (talk) 19:28, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
• Rose Quarter should be linked first time.
  • Done. --Truflip99 (talk) 19:28, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
• " it is intended as a symbol of good health and longevity"
  • Done. --Truflip99 (talk) 19:28, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
• "am" -> "a.m." per MOS.
  • MOS:TIME states either a.m. or am works.
• " take 17 minutes to reach Expo Center station and ten minutes" 17/10 or seventeen/ten.
  • Done. --Truflip99 (talk) 19:28, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
• No spaced hyphens in the ref titles, spaced en-dashes please.
  • Done. --Truflip99 (talk) 19:28, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

That's it. Short article, not much to worry about, so I'll put it on hold while we get these sorted. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:27, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for taking the time to review this! I've addressed all of your points. --Truflip99 (talk) 19:28, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

Truflip99 no worries, responded to the one open issue. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 19:36, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

The Rambling Man omitted =) --Truflip99 (talk) 19:37, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

Okay, all good, so I'll promote, good work! The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 19:42, 22 September 2019 (UTC)

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