Talk:Of the Subcontract

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Roo9820 in topic Work in progress

Article's title has an interesting style, but is clear. Lead paragraph is the extent of the article and thus is not really effective. Improve the lead by adding more content below it. Free of grammar errors.

Article meets NPOV, NOR, and V criteria. Wikilinks are not used at all. References are reliable sources so article has notability. Using an image of the cover or one of the poems would be a great idea. Great use of the info box. No external resources used. Overall, looking good. Mazurr15 (talk) 22:02, 6 October 2015 (UTC)Reply


This article has a clear and memorable title. I can see you are still working on this and that the lead paragraph is not very strong yet.

Work in progress edit

Definitely a great start, but is the title formatted correctly... I think the source code should be ="Heading"= it looks like you're using Heading"' instead. I like the information chart though. Phoenix5100 (talk) 21:34, 6 October 2015 (UTC)Reply


I liked the formatting, and the chart, but the brevity of the article is something that needs to be addressed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tmarshon97 (talkcontribs) 21:55, 6 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Good start, not far off from the correct format. I think the only obvious problem with this article is the lack of information. You may look to include more specific information based on the content of the book, and what each of the contributors added to "Of the Subcontract." Roo9820 (talk) 22:05, 6 October 2015 (UTC)Reply