Talk:North Transfer Station/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by SounderBruce in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 01:24, 4 March 2020 (UTC)
Why not. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:24, 4 March 2020 (UTC)
- I know it's complete, but is it operating?
- Fixed.
- I haven't gone through the article yet but I can see the lead is a bit lacking. Maybe you need to add some history to it.
- Could add some more building features too.
- Expanded lead.
- Could add some more building features too.
- "Community amenities, including the plaza and public artwork, were installed in March 2016 while work continued inside the buildings to install electrical and HVAC systems" Comma after 2016?
- Or split the sentences to include the progress for each building instead.
- Rewrote and split the sentence.
- AGF on offline sources.
What a dump. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:06, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
- @Nova Crystallis: All done. Thanks for the review. SounderBruce 22:18, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
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