Talk:Nasodigitoacoustic syndrome/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 02:46, 20 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

I will get started on this in depth tomorrow. Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 02:46, 20 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Looks pretty good so far, no major issues. Now combing for image problems or issues with MoS compliance. Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 22:35, 20 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

On hold for now. Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 22:59, 20 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Comments

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  • No period at the end of the X-chromosome caption. Doesn't form a complete sentence.
  •   Done
  • The reference "Hereditary hearing loss and its symptoms" needs an accessdate.
  •   Done
  • The {{Main}} in "Cause and Genetics" needs to be at the top.
  •   Done
  • "Cited Literature" should be renamed to "Works or Publications" and moved above the references section.
  •   Done
  • The "et. al" and the dates when you refer to studies need to go. That information is available in the references and just clutters up the article.
  •   Done

Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 22:59, 20 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for reviewing! Much appreciated :) Rcej (Robert) - talk 04:24, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply
Looks good. Congrats! Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 12:19, 21 April 2011 (UTC)Reply

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Is there an image available of the finger changes? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 03:55, 1 September 2011 (UTC)Reply