Talk:Namibia at the 2019 World Athletics Championships/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 20:35, 5 July 2020 (UTC)Reply


Happy to review this article. Amitchell125 (talk) 20:35, 5 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Assessment

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Background

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  • Link Commonwealth.

Results

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  • ...became Namibia first female medalist at the World Athletics Championships. - ‘Namibia’s' and no full stop at he end.
  • ...what a report in the Namibian Sun - amend to ‘...what the Namibian Sun…’?
  • When I've done that before, I've been asked to change it "because a newspaper isn't a person, and can't have an opinion". Hence this awful construction when there wasn't an author. That said, this isn't going anywhere near FA, so I'm more than happy to change it. Harrias talk 07:59, 7 July 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Who is Mike Rowbottom?
  • ... her Commonwealth Games victory had come in high temperatures. - I would specify here that she won the race the previous year, and that the race was held in the Gold Coast at a temperature of 27 degrees.
  • Ref 12 (The Namibian) notes the heat and humidity (32 degrees, 80%). Worth including?
  • ... in 17th. - imo ‘... in 17th place.’ sounds better.
  • ...Championships' medal table… - misplaced apostrophe?

On hold

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I'm sure it won't take too long to address these comments. On hold until 14 July. Amitchell125 (talk) 20:44, 6 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Amitchell125: Responded to each above. Thanks for the review. Harrias talk 08:00, 7 July 2020 (UTC)Reply

Passing

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All looks good, passing now. Amitchell125 (talk) 08:29, 7 July 2020 (UTC)Reply