Talk:Naji Marshall/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:54, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 10:54, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
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Lead
edit- "Marshall attended two high schools and Hargrave Military Academy as a postgrad" - formal; postgraduate
- Wikilink points per game for those unfamiliar with basketball
High school career
edit- "and now coaches basketball at an elementary school," - and is now a basketball coach to avoid WP:LIMITED in the Cincicatti Enquirer source
- "Marshall has five brother's and one sister" - brothers
- Wikilink point to Point (basketball), rebound to Rebound (basketball), assist to Assist (basketball) and steal to Steal (basketball) for those unfamiliar with basketball terms
- "He led Eleanor Roosevelt to a 24–3 record" - The Washington Post has the record at 23–3
- "as a postgrad to improve his academics" - formal; postgraduate student
- "but committed to" - more complete but committed to playing college basketball for
- "He competed for DC Premier on the AAU circuit." - spell out AAU in full
College career
edit- "Marshall contributed 12 points and four rebounds in his collegiate opener" - formal; opening game
- Wikilink jump shot for those who are not versed in basketball
- "and notching four assists" - more formal; achieving
- "He was named to the Second Team All-Big East as a sophomore." - The Cincinnati Enquirer states league coaches named Marshall to this team and thus can be mentioned in this article
- Wikilink Julius Erving Award
- "He sat out a game against Western Carolina on December 18 with an illness." - you can state he had a stomach virus as mentioned by the Asheville Citizen Times
References
edit- "Xavier's Bluiett, Villanova's Brunson, Butler's Martin Unanimously Named All-BIG EAST" - try to avoid all capital letters per MOS:ALLCAPS
Overall the main issues with the article are portions of the prose that are informal and some that is lacking in specific detail. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 11:28, 1 March 2020 (UTC)