Talk:Nå skruva Fiolen/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will undertake this review tomorrow. --K. Peake 16:19, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

Super, thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:22, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
  • Thanks.
• "and mimics the rhythm" → "and mimicking the rhythm"
  • Done.
• "and certainly pretended to play it" → "certainly pretending to play it"
  • Done.
• Use double speech marks instead for "screw"
  • Done.
• Add a sentence mentioning Fred Åkerström's recording at the end of the lead, as this is notable
  • Done.

Background

• Good
  • Noted.

Epistle

Music and verse form

• Add relevant text to the audio sample to justify its usage
  • Done.
• Wikilink cello
  • Done.
• Pipe ²
  ₄ time to Duple and quadruple metre
  • Done.
• Wikilink timbre
  • Not done, the article is about the quality of a tone, not the meaning here.
• "on the 3rd and 4th lines," → "on the third and fourth lines," per MOS:NUM
  • Done.

Lyrics

• Img looks good!
  • Noted.
• "It is subtitled" → "The composition is subtitled" to avoid overusage of it
  • Done.
• Remove commas around Paul Britten Austin
  • Done.
• Versions of the start of Epistle No. 2 → Starting lines of Epistle No. 2
  • Done.

Reception and legacy

• Imgs look good!!
  • Thanks.
• Remove wikilink on cello in prose
  • Done.
• Remove wikilink on cittern
  • Done.
• Pipe tuning pegs to Tuning mechanisms for stringed instruments
  • Done.
• Wikilink folk music
  • Done.
• "recorded it also on his 1974 studio album Glimmande Nymf, where it was" → "also recorded the song on his 1974 studio album Glimmande Nymf, where it was included as"
  • Reworded.
• Wikilink flute
  • Done.
• Pipe classical to Classical music
  • Done.

Notes

• Shouldn't there be sources for the info of the notes since they are not mentioning anything corresponding with refs next to them?
  • Added.

References

• Copyvio score is undetectable at 0%!!!!
  • Noted.
• Shouldn't ref 10 be cited in place of ref 6 since that also invokes p. 63?
  • Noted, but ref 6 is more specific, which is better for its task.
• Cite Bellman.net as publisher instead on ref 9
  • Done.
• WP:OVERLINK of Fred Åkerström on ref 15
  • Done.
• Pipe WEA Records to Warner Music Group and fix WP:OVERLINK of Fred Åkerström on ref 16
  • Done.
• Pipe Sterling to Sterling Records (Sweden) on ref 17
  • Done.

Sources

• Good
  • Thanks.

External links

• Shouldn't you write on YouTube after the links to the videos?
  • Done.

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 07:40, 19 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Kyle Peake - all done now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:59, 20 June 2022 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, quick response once again! --K. Peake 07:06, 20 June 2022 (UTC)