Talk:More than Friends (Inna song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:34, 18 June 2017 (UTC)

Full revew coming next weekend. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:34, 18 June 2017 (UTC)

Infobox

• Fine, just remove house genre as the source is not reliable.

 Not done See below

Lead

• remove house genre

 Not done The Times of India cites house; removed Radio Eska though

• remove "but also criticized its release process." Unless they said something else as source is not reliable.

 Not done See below

• four countries is not multiple countries → some countries including Poland, Romania and Spain (for example)

 Done

Background and composition

• Eska.pl has nothing regarding the genre or instrumentation.

 Done Removed

• Please see below for unreliable sources.
• Sample quality needs to be reduced see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Music samples.

 Done

I just meant the quality of the track not its length, but its fine. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:32, 25 June 2017 (UTC)

Reception

• Re-title the section as "Critical and commercial reception"

 Done

• The Times of India's → should add the rating of the reviewer.

 Not done The rating is for the entire album, not for the single only

My bad then. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:18, 23 June 2017 (UTC)

• Remove "experienced success on record charts. It" → I wouldn't call it success

 Done

Music video

• Replace the direct lyrics source with this one [1]

 Not done See below

• "Both clips were shot by Edward Aninaru at Venice Beach in Los Angeles" → remove youtube links the Romanian reference you have along with the one above will be good enough.

 Done

• Same goes for the image.

 Done

• "The visual opens with shots of the beach...Inna dancing to the track at sunset, and her taking a shower." → also add this to help with the description of the video[2].

 Done

• I'm not sure regarding RnbJunk reliability, is quite questionable.

See below for my comment regarding this

Live performances

• "She also opened the Untold Festival in 2016." → Irrelevant she didn't performed the song there.

 Done Removed

Track listing

• Collpase table for the digital remixes EP.

I don't know how to do this; could you help me?

Sure. I will redirect you to a page that has if its fine with you. [3]. See the writers list.

 Done

Credits and personnel

• Engineers, mixers, recording, mastering?

 Not done Unfortunately not available, as for many other Inna songs

• Places it was recorded, mastered, mixed?

Same as above

 Done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:16, 23 June 2017 (UTC)

Charts and certifications

Weekly charts

• Everything is fine.

Thank you!

Year-end charts

• Fine.

Certifications

• Fine.

Release history

• Short section including the process of release.

 Done

• The last link has several remixes, such information should be added as it's not a stand alone release like the ones above.

 Done

References

• Direct lyrics and RnB junk are not reliable sources.

 Not done Direct Lyrics is the most reliable source of these two. It is permanently used in other Good Articles and I didn't have any problems with it in past GANs. The same goes RnB Junk; I used it a lot without problems.

@Cartoon network freak: While I could let Direct Lyrics pass by, I can't with RnB junk it clearly says it is a blog and the writer is a young adult with no verifiable studies. So whoever let you do that, shouldn't have done. You really have to remove RnB junk. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:15, 23 June 2017 (UTC)

• Toom any YouTube references, if you could replace some of them (Live performances) it would be great. Otherwise, just leave them as they are linked the official artist page.

 Not done Sorry, but there was no media coverage concering her live performances.

External links

• No need for her official website. It should already be on her main page.

 Done

Overall GA review

• Good article, some fixes and I'll give it a second look. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:03, 22 June 2017 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I greatly thank you for the review. I responded to all your comments. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 01:23, 23 June 2017 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Removed every bit about RnB Junk from the article... Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:26, 23 June 2017 (UTC)

@Cartoon network freak: I jsut left you a link to know how a collapse list works. I'll see everything later today or tomorrow. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:49, 23 June 2017 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I collapsed the track listing. Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:43, 23 June 2017 (UTC)