Talk:Mary, Queen of Hungary/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:03, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 15:03, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 18:44, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

@Borsoka: I am reviewing some articles now, including this one:

Lead

• seven days after Louis I's death Is this the same as Louis the Great? We should stick to any one name throughout the article.
• Link regency as done in the main text

Childhood

• Mary was born in the second half of 1371 Better write the "latter half"
• her paternal grandmother, Elizabeth Give her full name so that she is not confused with Elizabeth of Bosnia.

Restoration and capture (1386–1387)

• Can "knighted" be linked?

Her husband's co-ruler (1387–1395)

• The injuries the queen sustained were fatal --> The queen succumbed to the fatal injuries
• The lead does not mention how Mary died

Images: It is incredible that we do not have an image of Sigismund of Luxembourg in this article.

That should be all. An enjoyable read. Good luck! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 09:56, 28 March 2016 (UTC) @Sainsf:, I highly appreciate your review. Thank you for it. I hope I fixed the above problems. Please contact me if further actions were needed. I think there is an image of Sigismund (I refer to his seal, which is the last picture). Borsoka (talk) 18:25, 29 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for your response. I believe this article is ready to be a GA. I am happy to promote this. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 11:48, 31 March 2016 (UTC)