Talk:Marina South Pier MRT station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:21, 13 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "planning area" what's that?
• "2008 Land Transport Master Plan" this sounds notable enough for an article.
• "Platform level of Marina South Pier MRT station." fragment, no full stop required.
• "The North South line, " put the abbreviation here.
• And then use it!
• "at a contract sum of" contract is repeated.
• "the waler components" what's that?
• "which crushed the worker" what, the dislodged water?
• "then-Minister for Transport" I don't think "then-" is needed, it's pretty obvious that it's a contemporary discussion.
• "North South line (NSL), " should have done this in the previous section.
• "station showcases two " not encyclopedic tone.
• "two parts[22] using" move that ref to the end of the sentence.
• "20 different shades of colours" why not just "20 different colours"?
• "Prvacki proceeded to hand-paint the various slabs and united them" -> "Prvacki hand-painted the various slabs and united them"
• Plenty of spaced hyphens which should be en-dashes.

That's all I can see in a first read, on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:19, 14 May 2021 (UTC)

• • Fixed the above mentioned. Removed "planning area", the full stop and abbreviated accordingly (though I thought we are supposed to abbr every new section? I am not sure). Waler components changed to beam structures, added wikilink. And Lui Tuck Yew is no longer Minister, which is why the "then-". Replaced showcases with displays. Also changed the dashes.--ZKang123 (talk) 12:27, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Yes, I understood why "then-" but it was unnecessary, it was obvious it was about the minister at that time. Passing now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:17, 17 May 2021 (UTC)