Talk:Manresa Island/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:21, 22 July 2019 (UTC)Reply


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  • " ...as Boutons Island ... Keyser Island was..." awkward sequence.
  • Unlikely to need "marsh" to be linked, commonplace word as far as I'm concerned.
    • I linked it only because its technical, ecological sense seems important here. I wouldn't know the precise meaning of marsh offhand, even though I might have an idea of what it is. Ergo Sum 00:43, 23 July 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • " in the late 1800s" is that as close as we can get? Not even down to decade?
  • "establishing a retreat center.[6] The retreats " singular to plural in short order here.
  • " doing significant ecological " I have a pathological hatred of "doing" in the encyclopedia, could we use "causing"?
  • "significant expansion over the years, with the most dramatic expansions " bit repetitive here.

Otherwise good to go. So I'll put it on hold for now. The Rambling Man (REJOICE!) 12:36, 22 July 2019 (UTC)Reply

All good, thanks for your patience, promoted. The Rambling Man (REJOICE!) 06:16, 27 July 2019 (UTC)Reply
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