Talk:MS Europic Ferry/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 21:38, 9 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Taking this one. Review to follow after the Bot runs. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:38, 9 April 2021 (UTC) Look pretty good. Some comments:Reply

Done - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • European Ferries is a duplicate link.
Delinked - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Commas after Netherlands, England, Sierra Leone, Southampton, Northern Ireland, India (MOS:GEOCOMMA)
I got these, I think - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Little bit confused here, probably because my geography of the UK is so bad. Was it built at the Neptune Yard at Walker-on-Tyne, or the Wallsend West Yard at Wallsend?
Sounds like your knowledge is better than mine! I confused the company HQ (Wallsend) with the yard (Neptune, at Walker). Now fixed - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Any idea of the size of the crew?
Found the original crew in Clegg and added - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • fitted with pintle-mounted Bren light machine guns as a rudimentary defence against low-level air attack That would work well against a modern jet aircraft.
Indeed, suspect it was largely of psychological benefit! - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Europic Ferry was one of the first vessels to be identified by the Ministry of Defence as required for the campaign, it was earmarked for use as a stores transport ship in early April. semi-colon instead of comma
Done - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • After assembling to the east of the Falkland Islands the force sailed on 20 May Comma after Falkland Islands
Done - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Entering the bay in the early morning of 22 May she spent much of the day anchored offshore Comma after 22 May.
Done - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Capitalise "Chinook"
Done - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
Done - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Med Link Lines is red-linked but Howill Shipping is not?
Redlinked Howill and Namora, not familiar with them but they seem reasonable targets for articles - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • She sailed for the United Kingdom on 23 June carrying returning troops of 2nd and 3rd Battalion, Parachute Regiment. "Battalions"
Done - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hawkeye7 (discuss) 22:23, 9 April 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hi Hawkeye7. Sorry I forgot to watchlist this, so I missed your review. I'm just waiting for a copy of Clegg (1969) which should arrive in the next week or so before I look at this one again. Many thanks - Dumelow (talk) 06:50, 23 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
Hi Hawkeye7, I've added a few more details from Clegg and hopefully addressed your comments above. Cheers - Dumelow (talk) 11:12, 28 April 2021 (UTC)Reply
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Both images have appropriate licences
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    Closing comment: I've filed the article under "transport" with other merchant ships rather than under "Warfare"