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  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Dante2326. Peer reviewers: V00d00Child, Aporter90.

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Peer review 1

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Great topic! But you need some headings to seperate everything. Also content is a bit lacking but you are going in the right direction and keep on trucking! --Aporter90 (talk) 16:01, 22 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

Peer review 2 This is a a great article and I really wish it could be longer though. All of your references check out and I do not see any plagiarism in your article. Good job!! --Aporter90 (talk) 01:30, 8 March 2017 (UTC)Reply

I wish it could've been longer too, but thanks.Dante2326 (talk) 15:18, 10 March 2017 (UTC)Dante Dante2326 (talk) 15:18, 10 March 2017 (UTC)Reply

Peer Review

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The topic of this article has great potential. With that being said I think it needs more content along with separating your paragraphs with titles. The grammar in this could also use a tweak but other than that keep it up. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Michaelgav09 (talkcontribs) 16:06, 22 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

Thank you Michaelgav09, I agree with what you said and will make the edit. Continue to help me with my article.Dante2326 (talk) 16:02, 23 February 2017 (UTC)Dante Dante2326 (talk) 16:02, 23 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

Peer Review - More Sources

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An article on the Lucky Bastards Club by Richard Bauman. [1] Eugene Fletcher wrote a book about his experiences called "Fetcher's Gang: A B-17 Crew in Europe, 1944-1945." Here is a link to the book as an overview.[2] In an article by Edward Colimore called "Memories remain vivid as WWII vets dwindle"[3], there is a small section discussing the role of John Pappas, a Lucky Bastards member. All of these were found through AUM's online database. V00d00Child (talk) 15:54, 27 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

Culturally

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Might be worth looking for later cultural impact; I'm thinking, Catch 22, for instance? — O Fortuna! Imperatrix mundi. 15:35, 10 March 2017 (UTC)Reply

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